Tuesday, March 30, 2010

A tale of a tear

It was when reality struck
realization washed,
my heart skipped a beat.

A moment wrong,
a moment little too long.
never so has been;as i watched
into nothingness ma heart raced.

And so i felt it,
two thick drops of fat hot tears:
trickled down ma cheek
the scene in front blurred
ma eyelids seem so heavy
the stream which followed it
making ma heavy heart drop of place
surrendiring ,in the midst of itz race.

the rose does'nt seem so beautiful
the moon does;nt seem to follow me
the waves seem to trash on
the lullaby does;nt soothe me today
the world of mine....
is falling apart..


  1. hey nivi...well done..nyc poem..keep posting more..:)

  2. @anjali:thanx a bounce gal!!...ill sure post more!!

  3. i am glad u stuck to the first write up...and hey, fat hot tears... oooooooooooooooooooooo!

  4. @tristian???... heheh thanx :P

  5. wowwwww..nivi really doing gr888 job...like it daa.....suprb dear..keep on writing....potheee he he he he

  6. @alf,and sabeena aunty!!... thanka a bundle!!
    n pothee?...aunty!!..plzzzzzzz!!


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